- Finished Chapter 5
- Developed more tension between FMC and MMC, and reasons behind it
- Gave the characters a dangerous warning and everyone freaked out
- Introduced Peregrine (best. character. EVER!!)
- Laughed at my own writing again
- Wrote almost 1,000 extra words
"Peregrine opened a closet and gestured toward it, still
talking. 'You can put your cloaks in here. It’s pretty empty right now, since
it only has my and Alcasor’s in it right now. That’s the way…there you go. Now,
can you do me a favor? Alcasor doesn’t have much patience for my tricks, see,
and he’s always demonstrating or reading or transforming things for customers.
It can get boring being his apprentice, so you wouldn’t mind if I could show
you one of my spells, would you?' He only waited about half a second before
continuing his ramble. 'Great. Are you hungry? Good. Just watch me transform
this bowl of water into tomato soup. You’ll love it!'
Peregrine pulled a bowl of warm water from a cupboard off to
the side and waved his staff over it. 'Akwas cunvertendy is in pulmanty!' he
shouted with a grin. 'Now, just watch the magic.' The water began to steam and
swirl, turning a variety of rainbow colors. He jumped up and down, and some of
the water sloshed over the sides. He ignored it and stared at the bowl, his
grin growing wider. The miniature whirlpool slowly stopped, and the mixture
turned an orange color and thickened. 'It’s working! This is exactly what’s
supposed to happen! I’m brilliantly amazing!' His smile vanished as the mixture
continued darkening and solidifying, much more than tomato soup is supposed to.
When it stopped changing, it was a thick, brown sludge. He tentatively stuck
his finger into it and tasted it. The face he made quickly morphed into a
strained smile. 'Want some?' he asked, extending the bowl to Gabby and Rayand."
:D Happy writing!
~ Sophia-Rose
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